>>545I've had this idea going around in my head on making a fanfiction called "Boruto Remade" which is pretty much me redoing the story of Boruto so it's better.
Firstly, there's some things I would like to change from the start. Boruto and his sister are now twins and have a younger brother called Jiraiya or Neji, probably Neji. Aside from that, I wouldn't change that much, I would change the name of Boruto to Jiraiya but then the Boruto thingy of the fanfiction wouldn't make sense.
Another thing I would like to change is that thing with the chakras intertwining. You know how Sarada is asking herself if her actual mother was Karin. Actually make that a reality, only that it isn't. What happened is that the mother of Sarada is Sakura, and the father is a combination between Karin and Sasuke because Sasuke was everyday sucking off Karin like a vampire, and then the Chakras kind off intertwined, fucked up the genes, and that's it. There's a reason for this, and that's
if Sarada has Karin and Sasuke's Chakras, then what about Boruto? With Boruto would happen pretty much the same, his mother is Hinata, and his fathers are Naruto and Kurama, making for an interesting situation, since that would make it so he has, inside of him a kyubii which can't separate from Boruto's Chakras, kind off like a conjoined twin, Himawari and Neji would probably also have that kyubii growing inside of here, independent but unable to separate from birth.>Then why ahsn't this been discovered before, jinchuriiki exists since foreverFirstly, they don't tend to live that far, be it because of people actively killing them or getting so angry that the monster inside of them gets out. And even if they tried to live that far, they would probably never fuck because of their outcast behaviour. Hinata and naruto were the exception. Also, it's needed for the jinchuriiki to actually have their chakra and the monsters chakra intertwinedm which isn't the case most of the time, jinchuriiki's are a jail, not a hotel.Also, Sasuke wouldn't have OP powers. I mean, he would have them, but they wouldn't be so OP as to pretty much being a god and being able to change history if he wanted to. He can travel through space, only that like 50 meters or so, and isn't able to time travel.
Ok, let's go with the story:
Another thing I want to add up. In Naruto, you see the occasional technology showing up, but it's quite rare to actually see such a thing. In Boruto, on the contrary, you see how the hidden village has turned into an industrial city, and the school, instead of being a military school where you were taught to kill people, it's now more civilian, there's still the route to become a ninja, but in that case becoming a ninja becomes more of being a policeman than anything else, most kids go to the civilian route to become a civil engineer, a worker, or stuff like that.
This, in turn, means that the hidden village has become into a normal town, instead of a child mercenary camp. In fact, you see trains going around and one of the kids of the main story is a geek which is also the son of a billionaire thanks to their monopoly on the train industry. So, the story is like this.
After the whole 4th world war chimp out, the hidden village was fucking full of rich people, and they were seen as de facto goverment of the region, which is indisputable, Naruto with literal nuking capabilities isn't something to play with and the world was this close to fucking end. Now, about the technology, that was brought thanks to westerners. This is, after the chimpout and everyone turning into fruit, the whole world turned their eye into the region that is where Naruto is located because, you know, the world ending and stuff (
Let's not get into the fact that there was a literal war with the Moon, let's ignore that, shall we). the westerners needed some manpower to do some colonizing through the world, and because there was a shit ton of experienced people on that place (I don't know where Naruto is located, like, i don't know how the continent itself it's called, so let's call it NarutoLand) and so they contracted the help from some of these people, which got paid really fucking well, at the same time that they brought with them war loot, and thus, became the richest from the hidden village. These people, seeing the industrialization of the western countries, saw the writings on the wall and started industrializing NarutoLand, most precisely the hidden village, which has gotten so large because something something farm immigrants and XIX century shit. The families that lived beforehand in Konoha have comfy jobs meanwhile the newly arrived need to live in shitty conditions working 12 hour shifts and some of them outright killing themselves because they can't take it anymore. This industrialization, tho, was made with both western and native interests, this is, the west needs materials, and Konoha gives them to them, and in change, the westerners give them technology, machines and money.
The mental breakdowns are still occuring, and everything happens s estipulated till it is discovered the the purple hair girl is the culprit. There are hints, when they arrest her father *thing that I don't remember that great, I don't think it happens, but regardless
they see some note saying something something New Ne or New ANBU or something along the likes (This groups are Hanzo apologists, lead by Hanzo's kid, that want to make the hidden village great again, and are cooperating with the other warhawk factions on other states to accomplish such goal and return to a more simple life of cutting each other's throats, they also have the support from the kingdoms, as their power is being challenged by the ninja villages**).
Then stuff go as normal, Sarada discovers that she is 1/4 Sasuke 1/4 Karin 1/2 Sakura. Something, something, maybe Orochimaru's kid doesn't exists, maybe he does, maybe he is substituted by an OC character or someone else, I don't know.
Then we get into the new seven swordmen saga. Boruto and the gang go out to the mist village, where they meet that guy who is the kid from the iron fisted deposed dictator of the mist village, they do their thing, and then the coup happens. And it happens fucking hard. Technology was also brought up in the armament, it's no longer kunai's they need to worry from, but automatic weaponry, yes, Ninjas with AK-47 and shit, maybe even a discounted tank appears. The kids are inside of a warzone with their teachers, and need to get the fuck out of there. Boruto and Sarada, being the retards that they are, try to help the dictator's kid, but he is in too deep, he believes that it's in its blood to be a fucking psyco and thus go with the other swordmen, and they capture Boruto.
You see, Naruto is the main leader of this new world order of peace, which has driven a lot of Ninjas into bankruptcy. So he recieves, as expected, a lot of hate. And then you have these people, that are pretty much Mist Yihadists, and have captured the kid from the most powerful guy on the world which has made your life pointless.
They take some liberties and try to torture him in live television for everyone to see. Sarada and other people, probably Shikamaru's kid and another character, go out to save him, see some fucked up shit, maybe a ninja with his brains out because of a bullet, and reach the plaza were he is being tortured for everyone to see, but they're detected and taken as prisoners. The main guy of the seven swordsmen have a chimpout with Sarada, beating the shit out of here, and then the Kurama part overdrives inside Boruto, getting out of the bondage and fucking shit up for everybody to see.
And until there. What do you think?